Wednesday, September 2, 2015

week 10 blog post

Choose ONE of the following writing tasks
Writing Purpose: To entertain the reader
WALT show our writing skills
What counts (Success Criteria for all writing choices)
  • structure our writing with a beginning, middle and end
  • best possible words
  • makes sense
  • different sentence starters
  • paragraphs (especially important for beginning 

The Hero!  
One day there was a classroom. The classroom was a hub and the hub was called Rimu hub. There was a boy called the hero, he saved everyone in the world. He had a pet cow it was Magical and it was good, but when the bad guys came to get him it wasn't so good. In fact he was bad. But he had to sprint away from him. It was so good to be a superhero. But sometimes when he gets really angry he wins the fight. It is good but when he doses not
celebrate it is so bad.

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