Thursday, June 16, 2016

Free Choice

This is my free choice writing and It was really fun to write it. I learnt more. Hope you enjoy my Writing.

Free Choice Writing- Kayden
Persuade, Entertain or Inform?
I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.
You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas
Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation
  • Include simple, compound and complex sentences
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary
Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure
Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling
My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation
Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

The End
chapter 1 jamie  
There once was a boy called jamie and he was 11 years old. But then he had a good ider so he went to bed and shut his eyes. But all of a sudden he was in a totally different place!!! Help me please I need to find my way out. But just when he was trying to get out he heard thumping sounds. Same one opened the door.

Chapter 2 the king
Who there just please leave me alone. I am the king of this kingdom said the king. But why am I here. You are the chosen one you need to go on 3 quast for me and bring back to me a enderlord and a rune sword. Ok fine but if I do it and came back with the stuff will you let me go.  Yes ok these go then.

Chapter 3 the 1st quest
So he teleported me to a forest but why oh look i can see the enderlord these go grap it and try find my way out of here oh look there is 5 ender perils and 12 arrows and 1 bow and 1 iron sword. So these get to it.  Wait i can see a dragon these try and slay it and see what happens we might even get a friend for life. It is a white dragon these go kill it 5 hours later i never going in there again. Oh look what i found a list of things i need for the king
1: enderlord # I have got that item.
2: herobrine's head
3: steve's head
Well that was a really weird note so he have got the enderlord so these keep moving and try and find the rune sword. And get the first quest. So we can leave the kingdom forever LOOK!!!! I can see the rune sword so these go.

Chapter 4 a new friend/ 2nd quest
I was walking down the new quest lane and i found a guy standing next to the door hi he said in a big voice i am going to help you in your quest is that alright yes that is fine what is your name i do not have a name said MR . Noname. Oh ok then these just go on the 2nd quest this is going to be so hard but fun at the sametime
5 hours later.
That was a long trip to the 2nd quest so these keep moving and see what hits us. LOOK!!! Out there is a goblin in our path do you have a weapon. Said MR . Noname. Yes it is a iron sword I will go get him so we can keep moving. Look I can see the end of the quest. WAIT there is a dragon these go slay it so we can keep moving BOOM!!! That was easy

Chapter 5 the 2 bosses
Look dude there is a guy who look kind of like us I think we need to get his head. Ok these do this BOOM!! That was easy now these just grab steve’s head and now place a bomb and BOOOOM!!!!!! Look i have his head these go bring this to the king
5 hours later
Here you go king i have the things you wanted now can I go yes said the king BYE!!!! BOOM
Look I am back home.   
     

4 comments:

  1. cool story i don't like it / i love it kayden. keep up the fantastic work bro?

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  2. Thanks kahn by the way it is a good story

    kai pai.

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